thesis statement

slums are really bad because most of the people get sick in the slums , and there is alot air polution, and people die resently in the slums.

introduction

slums not a good thing for the people. thats why my class and me are going to talk about slums because thats a impoprtant ttopic because most of the people might be interested in slums.

interparagraph

There is a lot of problems in the slums. Would you ever wanted to know how

Living in a slums is like ?A slum is : a urban place in a city made of extreme waist

Slums are out of a city marked by poverty which slums are big, full of Diseases

and kid could die with does diseases. People that live in the slum are very

Crowded everybody is together like a family so the main idea is that all the

People like to live together because they already know each other from long time ago.

interparagraph   There is a lot of problems in the slums. Would you ever wanted to know how

Living in a slums is like ?A slum is : a urban place in a city made of extreme waist

Slums are out of a city marked by poverty which slums are big, full of Diseases

and kid could die with does diseases. People that live in the slum are very

Crowded everybody is together like a family so the main idea is that all the

People like to live together because they already know each other from long time ago.

outline

I-slums have alot of problems
A-would the people ever wanted to know what living in the slums is like.
B-slum is  an urban area in a city made of extrem waist.
C-slums are out of a city marked by poverty wivh slums are big , full of deaseases.
D-people are like famaly in the slums.
II- every bady is togather like a famaly.
A- the main idea is that all the oeople are togather .
B-they like to be togather
ii-people like to be togather but tight.
C-ltrhat the people that lives in the slums like to live close.
D- slums are dangerous for small kids baby get sick really quick
III-slums should be banned from from usa because people live so crowed, and people die really quick.
A-people die resently necause if the contamination.
B-the people that live in the slums get diseaese like nothing.
C-people living in slums dont have good madical care.
D-you would never wanted to live in a slums.
IV-slums are not kool
A-people live crowded.
B-people get crowded in does areas .
C-when people live to cloose the people pass there diseaeses one to another.

i told you miss jaeger that i wasd going to do it so now you could trust me right

Outline

I.         Introduction

A.     Hook

B.     Introduce to the reader to what a slum is

C.     Thesis statement

D.    Transition to first paragraph

II.         Defendable Point #1

A.     Main idea (Topic Sentence)

B.     Supporting evidence

                                      i.     Quote

                                     ii.     Paraphrase

C.     Explanation

D.    Transition sentence to the next paragraph

III.         Defendable Point #2

A.     Main idea (Topic Sentence)

B.     Supporting evidence

                                      i.     Quote

                                     ii.     Paraphrase

C.     Explanation

D.    Transition sentence to next paragraph

IV.         Defendable Point #3

A.     Main idea (Topic Sentence)

B.     Supporting evidence

                                      i.     Quote

                                     ii.     Paraphrase

C.     Explanation

D.    Transition sentence to conclusion paragraph

V.         Conclusion

A.     Hook

B.     Restate thesis

C.     Summarize arguments

D.    Leave the reader with something to think about

thesis statement